Astro has a dog

[Black Rabbit]

Cool. (And yes, you may call me Black. ) If I may point out, though, I do not remember Astro's dad (from the 1980's version) to be so... easily irritated? That is just my opinion, though. :d oh: I need to start watching Astro Boy again. I look forward to reading more, as it is quite hard to find good Astro Boy fan fiction.

[Novacain]

If I may point out, though, I do not remember Astro's dad (from the 1980's version) to be so... easily irritated?

He wasn't - he was more of a bumblin' idiot than anythin'...

@ AB03 - Didn't read this till now, it's actually pretty funny, though Jump reminds me of Scooby Doo.

Keep it up!

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

"Hmmmmm......where do you come form Jump?" i asked the dog
"ARF ARF IM FROM ANOTHER WORLD ARF ARF"
"Another world?.....what do you mean?" i asked the dog
"ARF A WORLD IN SPACE ARF ARF ARF"
"ASTRO KEEP THE DOG QUITE!" yelled my Dad
"Okay" i yelled downstairs i turned to the Jump "Shhhhhhhh...... you need to be quite Jump" then my mum came in with an energy tube
"Astro dear i brought you an energy tube" she said softly
I nodded "okay Mum" i smiled at her she smiled back and went out of my room
"HUMMM Wait mum" she came in .........

PART 9 COMING SOON

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

"Yes dear" my Mum said
"Umm about yesterday.........so you think i'm making up the story with Jump talking to me? he even said my name and he said that he's from a differant world in space!" i siad hoping for an answer..... but Mum just smiled and said
"Astro honey dear, don't say that" she said with sadness in her eyes
"Mum are you okay?" I looked at my Mum "Mum" then she callapsed onto my bed, Jump went
"ARF ARF ARF OH-NO I BETTER GO NOW, THIS ALWAYS HAPPENS IF I STAY TO LONG ARF"
"MUM.......DAD COME UP MUM'S FAINTED" i yelled at the top of my vocie then Uran came in and shouted
"MUM!" and tears wellied up in her eyes and dad came in
"HOSHI ARE YOU OKAY"..........

PART 10 COMING SOON

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

hmy: Ooouuu I can't wait

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

We was in the ministry of science, my Dad was really upset and Uran was holding Jump and I sat down
"hmmmm... I hope mum's okay" Uran said I looked at her and patted her back
"It's okay Uran, Doctor Elefun is doing everything he can to make sure Mum is okay" I tried to smile at her
"Astro, Uran...........*sigh* I hope Hoshi, your Mother is fine...."
Just then Doctor Elefun came out
"Astro, You Mother is going to be fi.....
"YIPPY" yelled Uran
"....ne" finished Doctor Elefun
I smiled, so did my Dad
"ARF ARF ARF PHEW GOOD THAT SHE'S ONLY A ROBOT ARF ARF

PART 11 COMING SOON

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

awesome your getting better

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

We went home
"Hoshi, dear you get to bed and i'll take care of the children" my Dad said
"Okay dear" said Mother and she went upstairs
"Astro, Uran, i don't want you to go into our bedroom" my Dad said he got out a DvD "let's watch a film while your Mother sleeps"
We sat down
"Ohh-boy this is the new movie i've been wanting to watch for ages" Uran said
"shhhh just watch" i whispered

AFTER THE MOVIE

"That was SOOO awesome" Uran yelled
"Time to go to bed Astro and Uran don't forget the refill you energy supply"
"okay Dad" Uran and i said, with that we ran upstairs and went to bed
"Good Night Dad" we shouted downstairs suddenly remembering that Mother was asleep.

PART 12 COMING SOON

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

ARF ARF ARF TAKE ME FOR A WALK ARF ARF"
"okay, okay Jump stop licking me would you!" I yelled but Jump continued to lick my face
"okay" i jumped out of bed and started to put clothes on "i will take you for a walk, okay?"
"ARF ARF YAY ARF"

A FEW MINUTES LATER

I had Jump on a red lead he seemed to like it i smiled
"ARF ARFASTRO DO YOU WANT TO HELP ME? ARF"
"yeah" i said then Jump started run, he ran faster and faster and faster then i saw colour's all mixing together
"What's g-g-g-going-g-g o-o-on-n-n" i asked but Jump didn't answer he just kept running..........

PART 13 COMING SOON

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

oooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuu