Astro has a dog
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PART 4
"Doctor Elefun, what's up?" I asked the doctor
"Astro, I'm just making sure you and your family is okay, but anyways some bad people are looking for a dog, the dog looks like this" doctor Elefun showed a picture of a dog with some brown pachers and yellow furr.
Astro thought "hay, that dog looks like the dog Uran and I found"
"If you see or find the dog, give it to the police, okay Astro?"
"Yes doctor Elefun" I turned off the video chat
"Ohh-no, I'm not gonna give that dog to the police, I just can't, it needs my help".....
PART 5 COMING SOON
"Astro, I'm just making sure you and your family is okay, but anyways some bad people are looking for a dog, the dog looks like this" doctor Elefun showed a picture of a dog with some brown pachers and yellow furr.
Astro thought "hay, that dog looks like the dog Uran and I found"
"If you see or find the dog, give it to the police, okay Astro?"
"Yes doctor Elefun" I turned off the video chat
"Ohh-no, I'm not gonna give that dog to the police, I just can't, it needs my help".....
PART 5 COMING SOON
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PART 5
"ARF ARF ARF DON'T GIVE ME TO THE POLICE ARF ARF" the dog howld
"Hmmm.....what i'am going to do" I bended down to the dog and said "What i'am going to do now little doggy, I can't hand you in because........ well I know I just can't"
"ASTRO! are you talking to that stupid dog again" my Dad shouted into my room
"YES and he's not stupid Dad" i yelled back, just then Uran came in and said
"Brother Astro" she beneded down to the dog "what shall we call the doggy?"
"I dunno Uran?" I replied, the dog started to jump all over my room "SIT" but the dog continued to jump on my bed.
"hehehe why don't we call him "Jump"? Brother Astro....
PART 6 COMING SOON
"Hmmm.....what i'am going to do" I bended down to the dog and said "What i'am going to do now little doggy, I can't hand you in because........ well I know I just can't"
"ASTRO! are you talking to that stupid dog again" my Dad shouted into my room
"YES and he's not stupid Dad" i yelled back, just then Uran came in and said
"Brother Astro" she beneded down to the dog "what shall we call the doggy?"
"I dunno Uran?" I replied, the dog started to jump all over my room "SIT" but the dog continued to jump on my bed.
"hehehe why don't we call him "Jump"? Brother Astro....
PART 6 COMING SOON
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PART 6
"Jump?" I mermerd
"ARF ARF ARF ARF ARF" Jump jumped all over my room leaving a massive mess then he ran downstars with Uran chasing after him .
"Ohh boy" *face parm* It wasn't long before......
"ASTRO!" my Dad belowd red in the face, my Mum had a strate face the front room was a mess.
"OHH-NOO" I started to run after Uran and Jump "COME BACK HERE URAN AND JUMP"
"NO WAY BROTHER ASTRO!" she yelled back
"URAN "
"IN YOUR DREAMS"
"MUM AND DAD WANT US! COME BACK NOW!"
"FINE" Uran came running back "Come on Jump"
*face parm*
PART 7 COMING SOON!
"ARF ARF ARF ARF ARF" Jump jumped all over my room leaving a massive mess then he ran downstars with Uran chasing after him .
"Ohh boy" *face parm* It wasn't long before......
"ASTRO!" my Dad belowd red in the face, my Mum had a strate face the front room was a mess.
"OHH-NOO" I started to run after Uran and Jump "COME BACK HERE URAN AND JUMP"
"NO WAY BROTHER ASTRO!" she yelled back
"URAN "
"IN YOUR DREAMS"
"MUM AND DAD WANT US! COME BACK NOW!"
"FINE" Uran came running back "Come on Jump"
*face parm*
PART 7 COMING SOON!
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PART 7
My Dad was very angry at me he kept on saying "Astro you are in lots of trubble, younge man!" and I will say "But Dad it was Uran, she want the dog in the house"
I was sent to my messy room. "Humpf........... I think Jump is gonna couse me a lot of trubble......." I started to clean my mess room.
Just then my Mum came in and said "Astro dear, you've got to understand"
"understand what?"
"your sister, Uran, she may be a trubble maker but you've have to take care of her"
"I know Mum.............do you think I'm making up the story with the dog, Jump, with him saying things to me?" I asked, but Mother's face was blank and said
"Hmmm.................... you better get going to sleep Astro honey"
"okay Mum" I said with a frown
PART 8 COMING SOON
I was sent to my messy room. "Humpf........... I think Jump is gonna couse me a lot of trubble......." I started to clean my mess room.
Just then my Mum came in and said "Astro dear, you've got to understand"
"understand what?"
"your sister, Uran, she may be a trubble maker but you've have to take care of her"
"I know Mum.............do you think I'm making up the story with the dog, Jump, with him saying things to me?" I asked, but Mother's face was blank and said
"Hmmm.................... you better get going to sleep Astro honey"
"okay Mum" I said with a frown
PART 8 COMING SOON
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I like the way you write Astro's Mom's personality! It fits her well. (From the 1980's version, I presume?) This is very good, and you've updated four whole parts yesterday! Keep up the good work. :3
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